Tuesday, December 22, 2009

*TSK TSK* Teaser~#4

Sorry I'm not doing a Kissing Day/Belated kissing day post.
This is just the usual teaser but one I had great fun writing.


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*snipped*

14 comments:

Karla Calalang said...

Oh wow, I was not expecting the last bit. I want to know who the guy is! And the last line is awesome. Cliffhanger? AHH!!! lol

But really great snip!

inkspatters said...

Oh, wow. I love motorbikes -- there are a lot of scenes in my book about them. Karla's right that this is a massive cliffhanger ending. Loved the tension in this. Great teaser :D

Amna said...

OMG!

YOU TEASEEE!

My heart jumped into my throat when I read the end XD

iman said...

Oh. This is great!

I want to know more~!

V said...

I like this line: "My general perception of strangers --rather, all living, breathing people --borders on paranoia." Funny, but it tells me a lot about her. Also, this whole scene is so tense and I really, really want to know how it ends!

Angie said...

Awesome! Very good teaser. I want to know how it ends too.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Oh, I loved this. What's going to happen next? I want to know.

I so totally get her paranoia. I tend to think like that too. Very nice.

LizPage said...

Thanks for your comment babay!

Eek my heart was pounding here!!! Her voice is so clear, I can see her perfectly.

Sumayyah said...

I can feel her paranoia and fear - great snip and your MC has a great voice. It comes through very well. :)

Leah Michelle said...

Nice snip! Great tension and inner dialogue--also awesome job on making the men uber creepers lol

choco (In Which a Girl Reads) said...

Wonderful! I could see the scene unfolding, and I could feel all your MC's nervousness. Awesome, awesome tension :D

J.S. Wood said...

What a tease you are! Very tense. Those men gave me the creeps!

Bee said...

Oh, you lovelies! XD

Deniz Kuypers said...

This is awesome. I was totally hooked. At first I thought it was going in one direction, but then it completely changed. Lots of tension too.

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