Tuesday, June 22, 2010

What Was Mine ~ TEASER

So, my two honours papers are down and I have four minor papers to go, but I'm back to teasing, because, well, I love teaser tuesdays and also, I haven't exactly been studying. All I do these days is watch the big boys in shorts run around the big ball to snag the golden cup and I can't help it 'cos I love the beautiful game and its beautiful players.
Anyway.
Onto the teaser.


*snipped*

YOUR COMMENTS JUST MADE MY DAY!

14 comments:

Caitlin said...

Haha - "I'm not sarcastic. I'm just a straight talker". Story of my life! :D great tease!!

Nomes said...

agreeing with caitlin. loving that line. loving your MC.

I also love the pros and cons line. so full of emotion = perfect showing

xx

Vee said...

I love love love your voice as always. There's something so lyrical about it, yet humorous too :)

LizPage said...

Awesome voice. Your writing really is poetic. Good luck with your papers and exams!!!

Glen Akin said...

Loved this. Your MC's voice is strong and yeah, sarcastic at times, lol Well impressed, I am :D

Emilia Plater said...

Lol @ their interaction! "I keep thinking about the pros of running away and then the cons double up and then I feel like I'm drowning." - I can SO relate to that. I love this! <3

Emilia Plater said...

Oh and - YAY FINISHED PAPERS!! ;)

bethany said...

Great voice, I would definitely read on!

Karla Nellenbach said...

"I'm not sarcastic; I'm just a straight-talker." LOVE that! great snip :)

Horserider said...

Love this! I'd really like to know what happened to her and why she wants to run away.

Becca Rogers said...

Woot for finishing your papers! Not many more to go. ;)

I agree with the others--I loved the voice, and could definitely tell she's a "straight-talker". :D

P.S. - Thanks for the kind words on my blog! <33

Bri said...

Sorry to echo everyone else, but I LOVE the voice. So real and honest. I'm also super intrigued by the last line. More please!

Sage said...

Love the sarcasm/straight-talker line.

Also, this blog is so pretty. I'm seriously jealous

RAD - Dot Painter said...

Thanks for the tease! Great work.

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