Tuesday, February 23, 2010

TEASER #3 : Breaking Away

*vamoosh*

15 comments:

V.M.Pettingill said...

love the dialog an how she sticks her fingers in her ears to walk away!

LizPage said...

Yay! I missed your teases. I love your dialogue!! It's so real.

Caitlin R. O'Connell said...

Cool, Bee! The dialogue is indeed lovely! :)

Karla Nellenbach said...

love the interchange here. 'you're so full of yourself.' 'aren't you?' perfection!

lynkay said...

Great interraction! Loved it.

Kaitlin Ward said...

Great dialogue, like everyone else has said. I'm definitely intrigued.

Sumayyah said...

I love the dialogue and interaction! I'd love to see where this goes :)

Laura McMeeking said...

I'm definitely agreeing on the dialogue. I love the banter and how she walks away from him at the end of the snip.

Mortem Twins said...

The dialogue's flippin' great. The interaction between Carter and the MC is intriguing. Nice tease!

Amna said...

YAY YOUR BACK!

I'm in love with the voice, and the pacing of this. I was totally hooked.

And great dialogue- it felt really honest and just RIGHT.

theunperson said...

I like this. It's got this edgy yet sweet feel to it.

-HJ/Jaece

Glen Akin said...

Great dialogue, though i wished you'd posted more

bclement412 said...

The dialogue is soooo fluid and realistic, and quite addicting ;)

Karla Calalang said...

I'm so intrigued! Great teaser! And lovely dialogue!

bookaholic said...

I love that one line-"That you crave attention and hate it too"...NICE...:)

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