Yes, Peter left me his thimble. And ran away.
love the dialog an how she sticks her fingers in her ears to walk away!
Yay! I missed your teases. I love your dialogue!! It's so real.
Cool, Bee! The dialogue is indeed lovely! :)
love the interchange here. 'you're so full of yourself.' 'aren't you?' perfection!
Great interraction! Loved it.
Great dialogue, like everyone else has said. I'm definitely intrigued.
I love the dialogue and interaction! I'd love to see where this goes :)
I'm definitely agreeing on the dialogue. I love the banter and how she walks away from him at the end of the snip.
The dialogue's flippin' great. The interaction between Carter and the MC is intriguing. Nice tease!
YAY YOUR BACK!I'm in love with the voice, and the pacing of this. I was totally hooked.And great dialogue- it felt really honest and just RIGHT.
I like this. It's got this edgy yet sweet feel to it.-HJ/Jaece
Great dialogue, though i wished you'd posted more
The dialogue is soooo fluid and realistic, and quite addicting ;)
I'm so intrigued! Great teaser! And lovely dialogue!
I love that one line-"That you crave attention and hate it too"...NICE...:)
Drop me a line~ I love hearing what you have to say! :)