This is a bit from the unedited, unrevised draft of my WiP tentatively titled Spirits Within I thought I'd share.
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So there.
I must get back to Rosa ;-)
Nov 16, 2009
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2 comments:
I really loved the dialogue! It build up the tension :)
Thanks Amna!
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