Sorry I'm not doing a Kissing Day/Belated kissing day post.
This is just the usual teaser but one I had great fun writing.
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*snipped*
Dec 22, 2009
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About Me
- Bidisha
- Storyteller. Equally obsessed with pop culture as well as gothic literature. I eat words for breakfast. I was the teenager whose act of rebellion was reading under the covers past bedtime. Couple that with caffeine, and sleep is a myth. Here for diverse Young Adult literature.
14 comments:
Oh wow, I was not expecting the last bit. I want to know who the guy is! And the last line is awesome. Cliffhanger? AHH!!! lol
But really great snip!
Oh, wow. I love motorbikes -- there are a lot of scenes in my book about them. Karla's right that this is a massive cliffhanger ending. Loved the tension in this. Great teaser :D
OMG!
YOU TEASEEE!
My heart jumped into my throat when I read the end XD
Oh. This is great!
I want to know more~!
I like this line: "My general perception of strangers --rather, all living, breathing people --borders on paranoia." Funny, but it tells me a lot about her. Also, this whole scene is so tense and I really, really want to know how it ends!
Awesome! Very good teaser. I want to know how it ends too.
Oh, I loved this. What's going to happen next? I want to know.
I so totally get her paranoia. I tend to think like that too. Very nice.
Thanks for your comment babay!
Eek my heart was pounding here!!! Her voice is so clear, I can see her perfectly.
I can feel her paranoia and fear - great snip and your MC has a great voice. It comes through very well. :)
Nice snip! Great tension and inner dialogue--also awesome job on making the men uber creepers lol
Wonderful! I could see the scene unfolding, and I could feel all your MC's nervousness. Awesome, awesome tension :D
What a tease you are! Very tense. Those men gave me the creeps!
Oh, you lovelies! XD
This is awesome. I was totally hooked. At first I thought it was going in one direction, but then it completely changed. Lots of tension too.
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