It's Tuesday once again, one of my favourite days on blogosphere, simply for the fact that I know what I should post today. So far, this has been an eventful month. I got a new WiP, one I'm having a lot of fun writing. Eventually I will also get back to SW (it's in re-planning stage), but I'm hoping to get BA finished before I get into that. And getting back to where this month is concerned, I'm hosting Angela Morrison Month and giving away a copy of Sing Me To Sleep. Be sure to check that out.
Now for the tease. This is from Breaking Away. Ronni is at a party.
*chowed on*
Jan 26, 2010
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16 comments:
oh, wow! this is good...i mean really good! I love the end lines...make me feel for whatever demons your MC is trying to chase away with the booze...two very enthusiastic thumbs up!!
:O Oooh, TWIN! Just... ooooh.
ohh this is very interesting! I can see there's a deeper reason for her drinking.
Woo, love those two ending lines. Hard-hitting.
But I don't need taste. I need the fuzziness, the numbness. My deal with alcohol is the after-effect.
That there makes me wonder, why?
Very good excerpt!
Wow, great teaser. I really do like those last two lines.
The first line caught me off guard! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA But I Loved this scene! You're MC draws me in instantly!!
Good Job!
Me=Hooked
Great to read, makes me ask a lot of questions.
"She's hallucinating; not a care in the world. I know that feeling. It's called bliss."
Need I say more? Really wonderful writing
Beeeee. I love this
Your MC has an awesome voice and the whole thing feels hazy and blurry as it should.
"The part that makes memories meaningless blurs.
The part that makes me forget."
^That was awesome. Just like the rest of this. I felt everything your MC was feeling.
LOL. A giant orgy. That'll stay with me for a whole week. Great job on this. I've never been to one of these parties (and my parents would probably kill me if I ever did) but through Ronni's eyes, I feel like I have. Great job!
I wonder what's going on in her life that she wants to drink to forget. I'm hooked!
Nice teaser. Dan comes off as quite the chauvinistic ass. Curious about what's behind your MC's drinking problem.
I love the way your MC describes the party and what is going on around her. I want to read on to find out what her deal is with the drinking! Well written snip!
WOW. Hooked from the first sentence. Drew me in. Great job!
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